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I'm Not Home Yet:: Chapter 1 :: Beginning Prologue by Called1-for-Jesus I'm Not Home Yet:: Chapter 1 :: Beginning Prologue by Called1-for-Jesus

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Ok Ok so here it is! Chapter one of "I'm Not Home Yet"

Thanks to all who commented on the preview chapter which will take place in this story :) But this is you're introduction to Manic and the background story you all have been asking for :D

Enjoy!!

Next Chapter: [link]

Jesus Bless you

Manic the Hedgehog belongs to Sonic team
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Sfoanni4c Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there any way you can put this story as something other than the PDF thing, I really want to read the story but I can't.
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Starsinger1 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Where do I read this?
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Foenix-Nightshade Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, I can just tell that this is going to be an amazing story. I look forward to reading more.

Keep rockin'
F. Nightshade
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Lionwar1996 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
*eye twich* that son of a-! *stops before completing, walks calmly the next room, shuts the door, then yelled things that should not even be in my vocabulary. Then I come back out*  I hate his fathers guts already. Anyways, off to read the rest. Great story so far.
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HallowpointPaws Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Manic! His dad reminds me of this SVU eppisode where they have to go against one of their own when the wife of another cop keeps claiming he is abusing her. During a basketball game, he even punches Stabler. I can totttaly see Manic's dad doing that.
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Manic's dad is mean enough...
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:iconhallowpointpaws:
HallowpointPaws Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Somehow I suspect he beats up his wife too. Does Manic's mom hate him too or is it just his dad. The song "My Mom" by Eminem kinda reminds me of of Manic's mom in this story.
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Manic's mother was indifferent to him in his first months of life, but she has grown to despise him as well and more abuses him mentally and emotionally with words.
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HallowpointPaws Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Manic, at least his echidina mommy loves him.
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:iconcalled1-for-jesus:
Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes she loves him very much... and takes good care of him :D
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FeatherlynneXWarrior Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sad!! ARGH!! I HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE(!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) abortion! It's SICK!! IT SHOULD BE MADE ILLEGAL!!!......ALONG WITH GAY MARRIAGES!!! (great story though. I like it. Ooooh, Manic, I wish I could just be there for him right now... :(
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah Abortion breaks my heart :( it's death and it's horrifying...

Thanks Manic just wants some love poor lil guy :(
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FeatherlynneXWarrior Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No kidding. Abortion's not just horrifying, it's murder. You know if a baby a developed enough it can feel pain..it just breaks my heart beyond repair..I hate it..along with Manic's family..Lord help Manic...
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's very true and sad... too bad people don't understand that... That's partially why I have the fan fiction up... It's like a silent siege or life tape...
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FeatherlynneXWarrior Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I try and incorporate a hidden message in all of my writings (some more blunt than others :D ). And it's a great idea. Not a whole lot of people write about stuff like this. I like it when people stretch the envelope in a non-perverted way. Good literature is SOOOOOOO hard to find these days (I'm sick of all the vampire crap ;) ) You know, if you switched the offical characters out with unoffical characters you could probably get this published :D
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ha ha maybe someday :)
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FeatherlynneXWarrior Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You should. I know I'd buy it! And I'm suren others would agree!! :D
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sweet sounds like a cool idea :)
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Nights2Dreams Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
it won't let me read it o.o
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aww sad it's a PDF... so it should be universal...
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Nights2Dreams Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aww... =( can you send me your story in notes then ?
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sure I can :)
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Nights2Dreams Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks ^^
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
no problem the first is sent chapter to you
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:iconnights2dreams:
Nights2Dreams Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank chu for sending your chapters to me X3 I can't wait to see what chu write for next time
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha they'll be out soon and your welcome ;)
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LittleSister505 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay, now tell me when can i punch his "father" and when does he go meat the echidna people so i can give them a hug and a trophy?
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ha ha you can punch them when ever you fell like it because they need it... :O did I just say that ha ha ... don't worry the kind echidna family will find him as a teen :)
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LittleSister505 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, they really do!! jajaja.

as a teen?!?! but he will need to wait so long!!!
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah he's good at hiding the fact that he's abused... so no one knows until later :( poor Manic...
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LittleSister505 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-.- i dont understand how as a little kid he is good at hiding that. dont teacher take notice at those kinds of things?
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He went to one half of the year of kindergarden before the staff became too suspiscious of manic's withdrawn state and his random injuries... so his parents pulled him out and began "homeschooling" him saying that Manic's personality couldn't handle the classroom experience
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LittleSister505 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay, okay. so i guess he never really got a good education at that age, because i doubt they would actually home school him.
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ha ha no they kinda just gave him the books and said "Here figure it out..." Of course I'll let you in on a little secret, Manic is very very intelligent and is mostly self taught so his learning abilities are incredible despite the situation he's in... kinda a miracle he used to study to get away from the frustration and pain of home
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elithehedgie Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
omq thats so sad !!!! :(
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:iconcalled1-for-jesus:
Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah... poor lil guy
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reyreyet Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man the dad's stupid, why would he want to abort Manikku! :cries:
I can't wait for the next chapter! :w00t:
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeah he is a jerk that's for sure :( I guess Manic wasn't supposed to be in his 'perfect world'

thanks I'm working on it :)
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reyreyet Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me instead with a crying face-> :iconhyperglompplz: <-Manic
Manic: AHH MY BACK!!!
Me: :cries:
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:iconcalled1-for-jesus:
Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aww that's sad but funny I kinda feel guilty for laughing... Though I think that Manic would like to have a hug :)
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reyreyet Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I kinda chuckled when I typed that in, so dont feel guilty. And of course Manic would LOVE a hug he's EPIC!!! :)
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha I agree :D He's pretty awesome! and hopefully in the other chapters his potential and awesomeness will be shown :)
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reyreyet Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why but of course! :D I can't wait! :eager:
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ha ha ok I"ll keep working on it :)
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RAWKINS11 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
so... they retain manic just to aparent to be good parents and later beat him? sound logical dont you think .
my personal reaction: “May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't.”

good story im waiting the next one!!
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ha ha yeah is that what we call this logic? His parents aren't the smartest of people... yeah poor lil guy he didn't deserve this...

Thanks I hope it will be out soon... I'm still working on it :)
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RAWKINS11 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
your welcome
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HallowpointPaws Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, poor Manic! I'd adopt him in a minute!
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Called1-for-Jesus Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah I think he'd go with you in a heart beat... He'd need some one who would nurture him well...
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HallowpointPaws Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd give him a middle name too. Something like Henry.
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